it's a good song.. obviously not the best from you, and what i noticed right away the first error of this song is that in the beginning after the orchestral part, your melody starts off tooooooooo early, you might have wanted to lag it or do something
Good job there mate. haha.
This is one of your best 2009 tracks. But to tell you the truth, you're dropping.
I mean, you're still good, but I don't get super impressed.
A few of the new people here are doing that part, and I wish you could do that again.
I mean, selling your music, or something, fine with me.
But maybe a free one that can impress people.
Let's do this. Good luck.
I'm doing the best I can.
Tbh, you're the very first one to say that I'm dropping.
And dude, I've posted 6 free songs this year and all of them contain my massive effort as always.
If you want me to improve, then it would be cool if u could give me some tips on where exactly i'm dropping.
Where's the third lesson =(
This song is truly amazing.
This literally deserves an applaud.
-claps-
Keep working, I personally love sugary happy trance, this is one of them, although it's not fully happy, it makes someone happy and relaxing near the end.
Real good job, would've been better if longer.
purpleNblack2
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Rated 3.5 / 5 stars July 6, 2010
it's a good song
it's a good song.. obviously not the best from you, and what i noticed right away the first error of this song is that in the beginning after the orchestral part, your melody starts off tooooooooo early, you might have wanted to lag it or do something
I didn't really know what else to put there besides a toned down melody :/
Thanks for your advice!
Rated 4 / 5 stars April 6, 2009
Let's talk
Good job there mate. haha.
This is one of your best 2009 tracks. But to tell you the truth, you're dropping.
I mean, you're still good, but I don't get super impressed.
A few of the new people here are doing that part, and I wish you could do that again.
I mean, selling your music, or something, fine with me.
But maybe a free one that can impress people.
Let's do this. Good luck.
I'm doing the best I can.
Tbh, you're the very first one to say that I'm dropping.
And dude, I've posted 6 free songs this year and all of them contain my massive effort as always.
If you want me to improve, then it would be cool if u could give me some tips on where exactly i'm dropping.
Rated 5 / 5 stars January 25, 2009
15/5 30/10
Where's the third lesson =(
This song is truly amazing.
This literally deserves an applaud.
-claps-
Keep working, I personally love sugary happy trance, this is one of them, although it's not fully happy, it makes someone happy and relaxing near the end.
Real good job, would've been better if longer.
Make a third lesson!